Poem: Unfinished

I’ve written another poem. This one actually attacked me as I was getting into the shower. Good thing I got Aqua Notes for Christmas. (Yes, they actually work.)

As per usual, this poem went somewhere I wasn’t expecting. So…I hope that y’all like it.


Life is full
Of business
Things you’ll get to

Thoughts unwritten
Sentiments unexpressed

And all the while
Part of you
Knows full well
That life often ends


A background truth
Something we choose
To ignore
Day to day

I’ll worry about this
I’ll apologize
I’ve always wanted to
See that
I’m too tired
To deal
With this

Life is
And sometimes
Far, far
Too much to endure

A legacy
Is what you decide
To leave


And when
The Long Sleep
Finds you


4 Responses to “Poem: Unfinished”

  1. Debbie Says:

    Wow!!!! You said a mouthful!!!! Another stunning poem. Congratulations!

    Now excuse me…there are a few things I have to go do NOW.

  2. Dianne Says:

    Fantastic!! I really enjoyed this poem. I hope you are keeping hard copies for publication.

    If you need more Aqua Notes paper just let me know, I would not want to miss one of your great poems for lack of paper in the shower.

  3. Susan Helene Gottfried Says:

    I likey.

    it’s been a long day and I’m out of words. For a writer, I think that means it’s been a good day.

    Which means I’m now a living example of your poem!

  4. angel Says:

    Thank you kindly, ladies. :)

    Deb…was one of the things you had to do pie-related?

    Well, Mum, I have two currently…so I’ll let you know.

    And yay Susan! *cheers*

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