This is not the poem you’re looking for

So…I promised to write a poem for a certain friend’s birthday (which is tomorrow). This is not that poem. It’s what happens when you’re trying to work on a poem and your brain is being cantankerous. Call it the proto-birthday poem if you like. (I don’t even know…) Right. Now I’ll go back to that other one…

Outlaw Haiku

thunderclap echoes
pistol spun and resettled
weary hoof strikes stone

One Response to “This is not the poem you’re looking for”

  1. DJ Says:

    You know, this is pretty fabulous in its own right.

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